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This
dramatic monologue deals with issues of memory and truth—but from a
rather unusual perspective. The speaker is the prospective biographer of
a Victorian writer. In working on his subject’s life, he discovers
something about his own motivations and anxieties, and reveals how his
attitude towards the writer changes. There are several large recent
biographies of Victorian writers that could lie behind this poem. The
most famous one is possibly Ellman’s biography of Oscar Wilde, but one
thinks also of Peter Ackroyd’s 1990 biography of Dickens. The sort of
biography that Duffy is describing is one very unlike the early
Victorian responses to these writers, which were anecdotal, and
sometimes rather bowdlerised versions of their lives.
In these large modern biographies, the biographer tries to get as
close to his subject as possible, finding out every detail of the
writer’s life through letters and other clues. Robert Browning’s
poem ‘House’ records his distaste for this kind of biography. A
modern poet’s treatment of the same subject can be found in Thom
Gunn’s ‘The Dump’ (http://www.diacenter.org/prg/poetry/98_99/gunn.html ) written after the death of Robert Duncan, where he compares the
activities of modern literary biographers to those of people rummaging
through a rubbish dump.
This
aspect of the poem reminds me of A.S. Byatt’s novel Possession, a work that similarly examines the motivations of
biographical literary criticism. In Possession,
several academics investigating the lives and works of two Victorian
poets discover something new and unsettling about the subjects of their
study. The desire to find out something new, to somehow ‘own’ the
subject through letters and manuscripts, is tempered by a realisation
that the academics bring their own expectations and preconceptions to
the study, and are not always happy to have them overturned. To find out
more about Possession, a useful site is http://www.sjsu.edu/depts/jwss.old/possession/
Like the
subjects of Possession, the
writer in the poem cannot be certainly identified as any known Victorian
writer. He seems to be a compilation of several figures, including
elements of poets and novelists.
Within Mean
Time this poem connects closely with ‘Café Royal’, another poem
where someone seeks to connect with an unreachable Victorian past.
The Biographer
The emphasis is
immediately on the person writing, not on the subject of the biography.
Does this suggest how the writer is really writing about himself? The
poem is going to tell us more about the speaker than about the
ostensible subject of his speech.
Because you are dead
The speaker addresses his dead subject
directly—it is a classic element of the dramatic monologue to have a
silent listener. It is only because the subject of the biography is dead
that the biographer can be there in his house, touching his things—it
is also the only reason that he is interested in the subject. The writer
becomes more interesting because he’s dead (cf. dead poets in the
title of the film Dead Poets Society, their death indicating they’re accepted into
the canons of literature).
Caressing
One of many words that suggests the sensual
interest of the biographer in his subject
The grooves in the wood your initials made
The writer, perhaps bored, or like a naughty school
child, has cut his initials into the lid of his desk.
I manage a quote
The speaker forces out a quote—he feels that it
is appropriate here, but it does not come naturally, it is not the easy
voicing of a thought that springs to mind. Perhaps it is an effort to
remember something that he feels is fitting.
Echo
one of your lines
The speaker is in many ways echoing the writer
throughout. He is not an original, he is following in the footsteps of
someone else.
Daguerreotype
An early form of photograph. Invented in 1839, this
dates the writer as a Victorian.
Excitedly staring out from behind your face
The first of a series of references to masks made
by the speaker. The writer is seen as more than the visible face, the
biographer thinks that he can see his subject’s soul ‘the thing that
made you yourself’. The writer is seen as vivid and excited by
life—even though he is dead. The ironic contrast with the speaker
becomes more clear as the poem progresses.
Like a hood and a cloak of light
The
writer seems, to the dazzled imagination of his biographer, to have a
visible aura, a radiance in which he is dressed. The idea that
especially charismatic people have an aura of light that can be seen
under special circumstances is one with a distinguished history. The
depiction of a saint’s halo is one manifestation of this belief. The
fact that this glow about his subject is expressed in terms of clothes
might make us think that the biographer is ambitious to ‘wear’ this
same cloak of light, to be deeply himself as his subject is. Kirlian
theory, first developed in Russia in 1939, and subsequently developed by
UCLA (University of California, Los Angeles) researchers, states that
this aura is a manifestation of the body’s electromagnetic field that
can be caught on camera, the colour and state of which denotes our
physical, mental and spiritual health.
The first four words that I write are your name
Like many biographers, the speaker starts the book
by stating the full name of his subject. The four names are suggestive
of elaborate Victorian names ‘Oscar Fingal O’Flaherty Wills Wilde’
for instance. The poem starts when the biographer is thinking about
writing the book, and moves through to its completion and publication in
the final stanza.
I’m a passionate man
A confident assertion—passionate about his
subject? Or about other things?
With a big advance
This is one of the important things about him, in
his own valuation of himself. An advance is a sum of money given to a
writer by a publishing firm, before they write a book, which is to be
set against future profits of that book. A big advance suggests that the
publishers are confident of enormous sales.
Who’s loved your work since he was a boy
This comes last in the speaker’s priorities.
Nonetheless, the sense that he has a pre-existing imaginative
relationship with the writer is important. He has ideas about his
subject that are ready to be shattered.
I slept alone in your bed
The biographer seems to be trying to get into the
mind of his subject by re-living his life: standing at his desk,
sleeping in his bed (echoes of Goldilocks?) and eventually copying his
behaviour.
The end of a fire going out in the grate
In the preserved house of the writer there is no
modern heating. To share in the imagined experience still more vividly,
the speaker has a fire lit in the writer’s bedroom, as would have been
customary in Victorian times. The image of the fire going out as he goes
to sleep makes it a chilly, lonely image.
You wouldn’t have wanted me…would barely have
noticed me
This sudden self-knowledge reminds us of ‘Café
Royal’ again, where the protagonist of the poem sees that he ‘fades
away’ before his idol. The rejection, though imagined, is bitter and
alters the speaker’s attitude towards his subject.
I felt your dislike/chilling the air/as I drifted
away
Both speaker and writer are ghostly. The writer’s
imagined dislike ‘chills’ the air, as the presence of ghosts is
supposed to do. But it is the speaker who ‘drifts’ away, ghostlike.
‘Drifted’ may also enact apparent disinterest.

Your wallpaper green and crimson and gold
Reminiscent of Wilde, again—the opulence
associated with the decadence of the end of the 19th
century—or possibly just the Victorian love for these heavy, rich
colours. William Morris was a key figure in the vogue for richly
coloured wallpapers. See http://www.thecore.nus.edu.sg/landow/victorian/morris/artov.html
for more details
The sound of your voice
Recovering the sound of the poet’s voice has been
a preoccupation for some academics. Although we have (for instance)
fragments of Tennyson reading part of ‘The charge of the Light
Brigade’, these early recordings are very damaged and unclear. The
texture and intonation of the poet’s own voice, something often taken
as integral to an understanding of a modern poet’s work, is often
something we can only guess at from contemporary remarks. (See Stefan
Hawlin’s excellent article ‘Browning’s Voice’ in Browning
Society Notes
Or "Eliot Reads The Waste Land: Text and
Recording." in Modern Language Review 87.3 (1992): 545-54.)
Emma Elizabeth Hibbert
An imagined contemporary of the poet, who describes
his voice in some detail. Before the age of widely available sound
recording, such remarks were commonplace
in someone attempting to describe a speaker.
Similar references to poets like Tennyson and Browning survive in
contemporary letters and journals. Cf. Max Beerbohm’s remark of Wilde,
who said that he had ‘a mezzo voice, uttering itself in leisurely
fashion, with every variety of tone’. (Ellmann, p. 37)
Cockney, a little
I.e., with a London accent. Keats was described as
a ‘cockney’, as indeed was Browning. It was sometimes seen as a term
of disparagement. Keats is said to have become deeply depressed when
John Gibson Lockhart wrote a review article for Blackwood’s in 1817
that stigmatised him as a member of the "Cockney School" of
poetry, which was castigated for the humble birth and allegedly boorish
practices of its members as well as for poor verse. Robert Browning was
described as having a ‘cockney’ accent.
London Town
An old-fashioned usage, perhaps suggesting a
romanticised version of the city.
The faces you wrote
As though he created the faces—not ‘wrote
about’, but ‘wrote’, like ‘made’. The writer is seen, like
Dickens, perhaps, to have been someone who concentrated on the seamy
side of London, writing about the poor and disadvantaged. Walking
through modern London, the speaker sees the same type of people.
A stew and tangle of rags
The person is not even dignified by a name or an
indication that they are a person. They are just personified ‘rags’.
‘stew’ is another, old-fashioned name for brothel. The word suggests
something hot and tangled in this context.
Sniffed by a dog
As though for food?
Hungerford Bridge
A railway bridge in London. Famous from an 1861
etching by Whistler (see right). In 1845 it was opened as a footbridge
for pedestrians. The scene suggests that the speaker is trying to
literally trace his subject’s footsteps.
The shadow I cast…the meagre shadow
This is a momentous encounter. The writer is spat
at by the beggar who represents his subject’s own subject. It is as
though the writer himself is rejecting him. He spits at his shadow (a
traditional way of cursing someone), and the speaker thinks of it as a
‘pitiful’ shadow—because in comparison to the great subject of his
biography, he is a shrunken figure, one without stature or dignity. He
will not cast a great shadow when he is dead, he is metaphorically in
the shadow of his subject, overshadowed by him.
I heard the faraway bells of St. Paul’s as I ran
The opposite to Dick Whittington, in the popular
children’s story, who, leaving the city, hears the bells of London
call him back, with the chime ‘Turn again Dick Whittington, thrice
Lord Mayor of London’. The real Dick Whittington was a mercer
supplying luxury fabrics to the royal court; he also lent money to the
King, and was Mayor of London four times between 1397 and 1420.
Maestro. Monster. Mummy’s boy / My Main Man
Four views of his subject—or of himself. Maestro
means ‘master’, usually master craftsman or artist. ‘Mummy’s
boy’ is a derogatory term, suggesting that someone has not grown up
and is somehow effeminate. ‘my main man’ means, the person I
acknowledge as my favourite or my superior: the person I look up to, my
best friend.
I write you and write you
Cf. l. 38, ‘the faces you wrote’. An act of
creation rather than of record.
Five hard years
Literally, the length of time it takes to write the
biography started in the last line of stanza 1, made to sound like a
prison sentence ‘five years hard labour’
an affair
with a thespian girl
cf. Dickens's
affair with Ellen Lawless Ternan, an actress in a company that he had a
financial interest in. The speaker again feels that he is in some sense
repeating his subject’s life.
Snivel
Cry, whimper. Used often of children, it is an
undignified word. It suggests his weak submission to his wife.
Her
poems and jam
Domestic security is suggested by his wife’s
occupations. She makes jam (like a member of the Woman’s institute—a
rather old-fashioned occupation) and perhaps writes poetry herself (is
she more creative than her husband?)
Her violent love
The speaker’s wife scares him with the intensity
of her love, perhaps also with her anger. For another example of a
snivelling, apologetic husband, a forgiving wife, and her violent love,
see Browning’s late poem ‘Beatrice Signorini’ (in Asolando).
And this is a life
Referring both to the biography—it is ‘a
life’ of its subject—and to the life of the biographer while he is
writing it. ‘This is a life’ is an ironic remark, almost a question
‘is this a life’ about his own occupation. Is it worth being called
a ‘life’ or not?
I print it out / I print it out
Enacting the repetitive action of the computer
printing out the author’s text. There is a sense that he is stamping
out the parameters of ‘the life’. Having something established in
print, to an extent, makes it seem more real.
In all of your mirrors, my face
As though in the writer’s house again (cf. stanza
1), the speaker is looking in his subject’s mirrors, and seeing his
own reflection. Here it is literal but also metaphorical, remembering
the mirroring of the writer’s life earlier in the stanza. It is as
though the biographer has turned into his subject.
Quizzical
Questioning, perhaps challenging. The eyes of the
speaker do not trust what they see.
Its cheekbones, its sexy jaw
The speaker dispassionately catalogues each part of
his face as though he is a stranger to it. He notices particularly those
aspects that are associated with male attractiveness—eyes, cheekbones,
jaw, smile. ‘Smallish’ undermines the ‘eyes’, but gives a sense
of precision to the description. ‘Sexy’ is an unforgiving ironic
comment on his looks—in other words, this is what the world, those who
only read the outside of a book, will see. He is superficially
attractive, but has no real validity in his own eyes.
Talentless
dustjacket smile
The biographer’s final assessment of himself.
Compared to his subject, he seems to be shallow. The dustjacket is the
detachable paper cover of a hardback book, which has on it the blurb and
often a brief biography of the writer, with accompanying photo. The
smile is false, ephemeral, because it is for the dustjacket, not really
part of the book itself. The image suggests how the writer feels himself
to be somehow removed from the book he has written, as though he exists
only on the outside of it. It enacts a deep unease about his position in
the world, and his right to be an author.
The poem connects in interesting ways to the poem
following it in Mean Time—‘The
Windows’—which starts ‘how do you earn a life…’ as though the
issue of how to become real, how to earn a real life is still a live
issue for Duffy. It also connects significantly to the poem before it,
‘Fraud’, another poem about taking on the mask of someone else’s
personality.
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